This wasnt all that bad.
Its not that the music was bad, cause it was made well. It was the fact that this sounded like most other techno songs, the riffs were slightly different, different notes, but the style was the same. But this was pretty good, congrats dude on this tune.
dude i really think i kept my style on this one, this sounds borderline mainstream to me, not mainstream. I mean for real this was one of my best produced and most complex songs. Noone seems to care when B0UNC3 submits his stuff that IS mainstream lol, is it because you expected my normal style and this was different? because i dont understand the lowered vote on it. thanks for the 10 on effort, cuz there was alot of effort put in this (even though it was done in 1 day)
Not bad.
The riffs sound a bit repetative, but if your singing while playing there isnt a way to get around that. Otherewise the guitar is ok. On the other hand, you know you need to improve on the singing, so I wont reiterate that, but if you work on iy your bound to get better.
Sounds great.
This is another great peice, besides one vocal problem. Im not sure what you are doing with the voices, if there are two or one altered, but at some points they dont blend harmonically. I dont know if you wanted it this way, but there are some pitch changes in words that I noticed. this doesnt change it dramatically, so it sounds good still.
This was the second recording I made of this song, and I actually prefer the first version I recorded. I think there are actually three or four vocal layers, so I probably goofed up somewhere along the way
Sounds familliar, in a good way.
I cant really put my finger on it, but your voice sounds like someone I have heard from pro albums. Your music fits your lyrics very well, but they seem to drown it out at times. Turn one of them up or down to make it perfect. Besides that, really good.
These are old songs, recorded 5+ years ago. My mixing skills have improved since then. Also, it's really hard to judge whether the volume of your own vocals is right... I'm quite self-conscious about my voice, so I tend to err on the side of caution and knock them down. Thanks for the 'pro' compliment though!
Nice little loop...
I have to say, its an interesting loop. Good drum beat and everything. The only problem is, your bass is too low, and when your repeat, the bass needs to get stronger, not weaker.
not really it kinda sucks ass, it was posted for the hell of it, like a failed experiment.
Pretty good...
I really like the melody in this peice, but your drums arent very..."interesting" maybe work on them a little bit. I may be too harsh on you I guess, because I'm a drummer and like drum beats...but you never know. :)
Nice...
This was very nice...but its not something seen as popular on Newgrounds. Classical is one of my favorites...but most newgrounders like techno. Now...seeing that this is classical then I have to give you good marks...because it was great! Very...interesting. More would be a good idea...
Very nice...
I like this, and since you took the time to review one of my songs I'll do yours. Very interesting...I can say that...but obviously just guitar...if you could add synth drusm or something that would be great. If you need help, go to my audio club in the BBS. Its called Audio Joint...and you have officially been invited.
Been done...
This is my hardest...I know you tried...and very hard, but whatever you used to record needs a lot of help...There was diversity...but it didnt fit together well..There is a lot of guitar skill there...clear the sound up and do something new and you could easily have something great.
Hey...review my music will ya?
Age 36, Male
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Mount Anthony
Bennington, VT
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